John asks…
Does my resume look apealing?
Hello, Hello my name is Karen and I am currently a teacher which was my first real job, but I am looking for a new job related to my Bachelor degree which is Business. Since I am looking for a job a made some changes in my resume and I would like some help in edditing my resume. please help me. I will really aprecite any tips. In addition, Do I need to have the skills section?
Karen Cárdenas
●Address ●City, State, Zipcode ● (xxx) xxx-xxx ●KzxzxsAsdsdsd@xmail.com
Career Objective
To utilize my college education, experience, abilities, bilingualism and other skills to assist in the creation of competitive and creative strategies to help the organization grow and prosper.
Education
Certificates: Type 59. Transitional Bilingual Certificate (Spanish- English). K-12
Rockford College Rockford, IL
Bachelor of Science in Business Administration Management 2008
Regent’s College London, England
Semester Abroad 2005
•Studied International Business
Professional Experience
Brilliance AcademyRockford, Il
Math and English tutor January 2010- June 2010 & January 2011 – Present
•Provide one on one tutoring services to students with low academic performance.
•From the beginning to the completion of the program my students’ test scores increased 40% on average.
Legacy Academy of Excellence Charter School Rockford, IL
Spanish/ELL Teacher August 2009 – Present
•Promote achievement and bilingualism in an enriched educational model.
•Create and develop daily, weekly and yearly curriculum while and adapting it to the students needs.
•Interact with families and promote family involvement to support student learning which increase the student’s grade on average by one letter grade.
•Worked with district representatives, school director, clients and special education teacher to initiate and continually develop the English Language Learners Program.
•Provide one on one tutoring services to English learners students while working with a group of experts to identify and analyze and solve issues based on the data or available information gather from the service provided.
Banco Azteca (Aztec Bank) México
Loan officer/ Assistant supervisor 2008
•Assisted customers with their loan applications and help them resolved any issues that arose.
•Analyzed applicants’ financial status, credit, and property evaluations to determine feasibility of granting loans and compute payment schedules.
•Negotiated payment arrangements with customers who had delinquent loans and came to an agreement 99% of the time.
•Worked with bank supervisor, sales man, technical writers, graphic designers and other companies to develop a new marketing approach which increased revenue by 10% of total sales.
Keep Northern Illinois Beautiful, Loves Park, IL
Marketing Internship August – December of 2007
•Initiated the link between La Voz Latina and Keep Northern Illinois Beautiful.
•Assisted in the development of press releases and translated written materials from English to Spanish.
•Promoted the development of new and creative ways to reach fresh target markets while conducting environmental research.
Languages
Fluent in both English and Spanish
Skills
Strong analytical and problem solving skills
Strong interpersonal skills and the ability to work as a team member as well as a team leader
Ability to communicate effectively through written and oral communication.
Organizational and multi-tasking skills.
Motivated self-starter with a strong desire to learn.
High proficiency in Microsoft office.
Able to adapt to new situations and environment
The Expert answers:
The resume is pretty good, but honestly I noticed quite a few typos/grammatical mistakes that you should fix before you send it out. You may want a second party to read the resume for errors, sometimes it’s hard to proofread your own work. Your resume really needs to be error free, especially with your background.
For example, from just one of the points on your resume.
English learners students? (just English learners, or English students, not both)
identify and analyze and solve? (identify, analyze and solve)
data or available information gather from? (gatherED from)
re: Provide one on one tutoring services to English learners students while working with a group of experts to identify and analyze and solve issues based on the data or available information gather from the service provided.
Helen asks…
How can I fixt my resume?
HELLO, HEY I WOULD LIKE SOME TIPS ON MY RESUME I FIX SOME THINGS BUT I PROBABLY STILL NEED MORE FEED BACK.
MY QUESTIONS ARE:
DO I NEED TO ADD THE SKILLS SECTION? DO I HAVE TO ADD THE REFERENCES OR SHOULD I PUT REFERENCES UPON REQUEST. DOES THE DATE OF THE REFERENCE MATTER?
Karen Cárdenas
●Address ●City, State, Zipcode ● (***) ***-*** ●KzxzxsAsdsdsd@xmail.com
Career Objective
To utilize my college education, experience, abilities, bilingualism and other skills to assist in the creation of competitive and creative strategies to help the organization grow and prosper.
Education
Certificates: Type 59. Transitional Bilingual Certificate (Spanish- English). K-12
Rockford College Rockford, IL
Bachelor of Science in Business Administration Management 2008
Regent’s College London, England
Semester Abroad 2005
• Studied International Business
Professional Experience
Brilliance Academy Rockford, Il
Math and English tutor January 2010- June 2010 & January 2011 – Present
• Provide one on one tutoring services to students with low academic performance.
• From the beginning to the completion of the program my students’ test scores increased 40% on average.
Legacy Academy of Excellence Charter School Rockford, IL
Spanish/ELL Teacher August 2009 – Present
• Promote achievement and bilingualism in an enriched educational model.
• Create and develop daily, weekly and yearly curriculum while and adapting it to the students needs.
• Interact with families and promote family involvement to support student learning which increase the student’s grade on average by one letter grade.
• Worked with district representatives, school director, clients and special education teacher to initiate and continually develop the English Language Learners Program.
• Provide one on one tutoring services to English learners while working with a group of experts to identify, analyze and solve issues based on the data or available information gathered from the services provided.
Banco Azteca (Aztec Bank) México
Loan officer/ Assistant supervisor 2008
• Assisted customers with their loan applications and help them resolved any issues that arose.
• Analyzed applicants’ financial status, credit, and property evaluations to determine feasibility of granting loans and compute payment schedules.
• Negotiated payment arrangements with customers who had delinquent loans and came to an agreement 99% of the time.
• Worked with bank supervisor, sales man, technical writers, graphic designers and other companies to develop a new marketing approach which increased revenue by 10% of total sales.
Keep Northern Illinois Beautiful, Loves Park, IL
Marketing Internship August – December of 2007
• Initiated the link between La Voz Latina and Keep Northern Illinois Beautiful.
• Assisted in the development of press releases and translated written materials from English to Spanish.
• Promoted the development of new and creative ways to reach fresh target markets while conducting environmental research.
Languages
Fluent in both English and Spanish
Skills
Strong analytical and problem solving skills
Strong interpersonal skills and the ability to work as a team member as well as a team leader
Ability to communicate effectively through written and oral communication.
Organizational and multi-tasking skills.
Motivated self-starter with a strong desire to learn.
High proficiency in Microsoft office.
Able to adapt to new situations and environment
The Expert answers:
Skills section does sound good, and references upon requests should be ok. I would get a professional to look over it for you though, as you really want it to be the best that it can be. Try this service, http://www.cv-shop.com/cv-review-critique.php
James asks…
IS MY RESUME APPEALING?
How can I fixt my resume?
HELLO, HEY I WOULD LIKE SOME TIPS ON MY RESUME I FIX SOME THINGS BUT I PROBABLY STILL NEED MORE FEED BACK.
MY QUESTIONS ARE:
DO I NEED TO ADD THE SKILLS SECTION? DO I HAVE TO ADD THE REFERENCES OR SHOULD I PUT REFERENCES UPON REQUEST. DOES THE DATE OF THE REFERENCE MATTER?
Karen Cárdenas
●Address ●City, State, Zipcode ● (***) ***-*** ●KzxzxsAsdsdsd@xmail.com
Career Objective
To utilize my college education, experience, abilities, bilingualism and other skills to assist in the creation of competitive and creative strategies to help the organization grow and prosper.
Education
Certificates: Type 59. Transitional Bilingual Certificate (Spanish- English). K-12
Rockford College Rockford, IL
Bachelor of Science in Business Administration Management 2008
Regent’s College London, England
Semester Abroad 2005
• Studied International Business
Professional Experience
Brilliance Academy Rockford, Il
Math and English tutor January 2010- June 2010 & January 2011 – Present
• Provide one on one tutoring services to students with low academic performance.
• From the beginning to the completion of the program my students’ test scores increased 40% on average.
Legacy Academy of Excellence Charter School Rockford, IL
Spanish/ELL Teacher August 2009 – Present
• Promote achievement and bilingualism in an enriched educational model.
• Create and develop daily, weekly and yearly curriculum while and adapting it to the students needs.
• Interact with families and promote family involvement to support student learning which increase the student’s grade on average by one letter grade.
• Worked with district representatives, school director, clients and special education teacher to initiate and continually develop the English Language Learners Program.
• Provide one on one tutoring services to English learners while working with a group of experts to identify, analyze and solve issues based on the data or available information gathered from the services provided.
Banco Azteca (Aztec Bank) México
Loan officer/ Assistant supervisor 2008
• Assisted customers with their loan applications and help them resolved any issues that arose.
• Analyzed applicants’ financial status, credit, and property evaluations to determine feasibility of granting loans and compute payment schedules.
• Negotiated payment arrangements with customers who had delinquent loans and came to an agreement 99% of the time.
• Worked with bank supervisor, sales man, technical writers, graphic designers and other companies to develop a new marketing approach which increased revenue by 10% of total sales.
Keep Northern Illinois Beautiful, Loves Park, IL
Marketing Internship August – December of 2007
• Initiated the link between La Voz Latina and Keep Northern Illinois Beautiful.
• Assisted in the development of press releases and translated written materials from English to Spanish.
• Promoted the development of new and creative ways to reach fresh target markets while conducting environmental research.
Languages
Fluent in both English and Spanish
Skills
Strong analytical and problem solving skills
Strong interpersonal skills and the ability to work as a team member as well as a team leader
Ability to communicate effectively through written and oral communication.
Organizational and multi-tasking skills.
Motivated self-starter with a strong desire to learn.
High proficiency in Microsoft office.
Able to adapt to new situations and environment
The Expert answers:
Holy snap, it is impressive
Sandra asks…
CHANCES AT JOHNS HOPKINS EARLY DECISION?
EDUCATION
Walnut High School, Walnut, CASept. 2007—Present
•SAT I: 2060 (Writing: 660, Math: 770, Reading: 630); SAT Subject Tests: Chinese – 800, Math Level 2 – 800, Chemistry – 770
•GPA (unweighted 10-12): 3.74 (10-12); GPA (weighted 10-12): 4.1
•Expected Graduation in 2011
Stanford University, Stanford, CAJune 2010—August 2010
•Coursework included: Astronomical Physics and Bioethics
WORK EXPERIENCE
Acupuncture Chiropractic Center, Rowland Heights, CAJan. 2009—Apr. 2009
Secretary
•Served as first contact when patients entered the office, answered phones, and scheduled appointments
•Edited and administered patient forms, filed patient histories, and cleaned gurneys
EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES
Walnut High School Tennis Team, Walnut, CASept. 2007—Present
Varsity Captain
•CIF semi-finalists in 2008, League Champions in 2007 and 2008
•Starting player since freshman year
Walnut High School Environmental Care Global Awareness Club (ECGA) Jun. 2009—Jun. 2010
Senior Member
•Spearheaded ECGA partnership with the Robert J. Bernard Biological Field Station at the Claremont Colleges that involved setting up an open house, weeding out invasive plants in blooming areas, and setting up plant ID signs
•Initiated recycling program at Walnut High School by implementing recycling bins in each classroom
•Organized campus and park clean ups at Lemon Creek Park and Creekside Park
Walnut High School Amnesty International ClubAug 2010—Present
Public Relations Manager
•Educate students about current human rights issues
•Organize meetings and presentations
•Discuss current events among other officers
Pomona Valley Hospital Medical Center, Pomona, CAMar. 2009—Present
Volunteer
•Worked in Labor, Delivery, Recovery, Postpartum (LDRP) helping new mothers feed their newborns, helped nurses with their duties, delivered meals, and discharged patients
•Organized patient records, made beds, and delivered and sanitized medical supplies
•Observed Caesarean Sections and other invasive surgeries
Long Beach Dragon Boat Club, Long Beach, CA Mar. 2009—Present
Caller
•Placed third in annual Long Beach Dragon Boat Festival team rowing competition
•Responsibilities as caller included shouting commands and beating a drum to synchronize rowing
•Served as paddler on 22 man team with ages ranging from 15—18
Walnut High Advanced School Orchestra, Walnut, CA Sept. 2008—June 2010
Violinist
•1st violin section
•Performed at school concerts and functions, Disneyland, and in the Walnut community
ADDITIONAL INFORMATION AND AWARDS
•Awards: California Scholarship Federation (CSF), National Honors Society (NHS), and San Antonio League Student Athlete Award
•Hobbies include tennis, violin, volunteering, Japanese food, and meeting new people
The Expert answers:
Here you go – enter your personal information and see how you compare to the most recent admitted class at JHU.
Http://collegesearch.collegeboard.com/academictracker/servlet/ACTServlet?pg=2&collegeId=808
You look like a good candidate.
However, with some of the finest schools in the world in the California state system, I cannot imagine any reason to go to JHU for an undergrad degree except ego. It would make much more sense to go to Berkeley or UCLA and then to JHU for your grad or professional degree.
Richard asks…
What would a more open-minded Liberal America look like?
Here is what I want to see in America:
2010 November: Democrats gain seats in both the House and the Senate
2011 January: Public Option passes for Universal Healthcare
2011 February: US Government proposes High-speed rail system project New York to San Francisco at 600 miles per hour….hires tons of US engineers, appropriates money to higher education for science/engineers
2011 March: New Public Housing projects, Government-subsidized intentional communities, eco-villages
2011 April: US Government creates a social program to teach Americans how to manufacture their own iphones and blackberries, how to grow their own vegetables, how to fuel their cars with vegetable oils without octane, so they can become self-reliant of oil corporations
2011 May: US Government begins a massive Nuclear Defense Shield Proposal that would include eliminating all nuclear warheads and improving shields to protect us from foreign invaders
2011 June: USA finally passes national gay marriage….gays, lesbians, bi, transgenders celebrate…
2011 July: (Government introduces a summer taxcut for anyone earning less than $500,000 pays 0% of income tax, every penny over 500,000 taxes at the 39.5% Bill Clinton taxrate)
Beginning 2011 August: A massive, and I mean massive effort begins to start cutting programs we don’t need….
The first big cut: Pulling out of Iraq and Afghanistan
Cutting back big on Medicare/Medicaid and health services and instead promoting in-house volunteer clinics
Eliminating 100% of bank bailouts
For K-12, elimination of the public school system – instead Government funds the self-reliance programs
We would eliminate the Recovery Act
Eliminate the Environmental Protection Agency, Food and Drug Administration, Department of Agriculture, eliminate the Department of Energy…we don’t need one when everyone is not self-reliant
Eliminate Social Security….free up that money…..instead we would have the US reward states that exempt seniors of all property taxes and rent…..it would become a states issue
We would eliminate so many Government programs during the last quarter of 2011 that we’d have a Budget Surplus, Public Option Healthcare, a High-speed rail system, an end to oil addition, elimination of the drug war…..it would be a whole new America!
Why put everything into health and safety when we’re not safe if we cant be modern and we have no Govt budget?
The Expert answers:
A Nuclear Wasteland – Mad Max Style
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